{"id":151,"date":"2015-08-10T12:00:17","date_gmt":"2015-08-10T11:00:17","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/maybethepoint.com\/books\/?p=151"},"modified":"2018-11-02T00:59:49","modified_gmt":"2018-11-02T00:59:49","slug":"how-to-kill-your-rivals-and-influence-people-the-demolished-man","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"http:\/\/maybethepoint.com\/books\/2015\/08\/10\/how-to-kill-your-rivals-and-influence-people-the-demolished-man\/","title":{"rendered":"How To Kill Your Rivals and Influence People<br\/>(The Demolished Man)"},"content":{"rendered":"<p style=\"text-align: justify;\"><em>The Demolished Man<\/em>\u00a0(Alfred Bester, 1951)\u00a0is a science-fiction inverted detective story, equal parts <em>Ocean&#8217;s Eleven<\/em> and <em>Death Note<\/em>. The novel tells the story of business monolith Ben Reich&#8217;s mission to murder rival conglomerate owner Craye D&#8217;Courtney in a world where psychics (or espers, &#8216;<strong>e<\/strong>xtra-<strong>s<\/strong>ensory <strong>p<\/strong>erception&#8217;-ers) form a significant proportion\u00a0of the population and a pre-meditated murder hasn&#8217;t gone undetected or unsolved for over seventy years. Ben&#8217;s primary foil is the police prefect Lincoln Powell, top-class esper who is able to &#8216;peep&#8217; through even the strongest mental blocks that a suspect can put up.<!--more--><\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: justify;\">Reich, non-esper CEO of planet-spanning empire Monarch, is motivated by horrible nightmares he experiences whenever he sleeps. Shaken from sleep\u00a0by visions of a man with no face, Reich decides the only way to end his torment is to remove the greatest source of stress from his life: Business rival D&#8217;Courtney of the D&#8217;Courtney Cartel. Before commiting himself to his plan, Reich makes a failed attempt to reach an understanding with D&#8217;Courtney, offering a merger between their two companies. The rejection cements Reich&#8217;s resolve: D&#8217;Courtney must die.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: justify;\">The premise alone is not super exciting &#8211; after all, it places Reich in the &#8216;jealous businessman&#8217; archetype &#8211; but Reich&#8217;s barriers to committing the perfect murder\u00a0make the plot thick and interesting: Anyone with murderous intent sticks out like a sore thumb in a city of psychics, so Reich has to construct a plan that will be untraceable and undetectable on both the psychic and physical levels.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: justify;\">Reich is a complex character: Thoroughly likeable, superbly witty, and naturally, a psychopath. Reich considers himself someone with the killer instinct: Able to follow through on a plan even when things start going to hell, improvising on the fly to make things <em>work<\/em>. Just how far will he go to rid himself of the faceless man, and avoid the ultimate punishment: Demolition?<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: justify;\">His antagonist (and our dual protagonist) Lincoln Powell was born with the highest level of psychic power. While highly sensitive and more than a little mischievous, Lincoln has problems in love. The Guild of Espers usually only accepts married people as president, and Lincoln&#8217;s refusal to marry has effectively halted his progress.\u00a0Columbo springs to mind when thinking of the prefect, although Powell has the added advantage of <em>actually<\/em> being psychic rather than having the trench-coat detective&#8217;s stunning hunches.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: justify;\">So it&#8217;s time to dive into the story\u00a0a bit more, maybe the first quarter of the novel. So here&#8217;s your\u00a0<strong>mild\u00a0<\/strong>spoiler warning.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: justify;\">After plotting and preparing to near-perfection, Reich&#8217;s plan goes off mostly without a hitch, barring the complication of the sudden appearance of D&#8217;Courtney&#8217;s daughter and the disappearance of the murder weapon. Lincoln is assigned to the case, the first of its kind in decades. Lincoln almost immediately deduces and reads Reich&#8217;s guilt, but as an esper&#8217;s &#8216;peeping&#8217; is not admissible in court Lincoln needs to put together a complete case against Reich by finding evidence in the three areas satisfying the police crime computer: Motive, opportunity, and method.\u00a0Here&#8217;s a quick gripe: <em>Why<\/em> is esper evidence not allowed in court? Sure, you need to trust the reporting esper, but why not just make all the judges espers too? I&#8217;m sure there&#8217;s a way to make this work. But I suppose that wouldn&#8217;t make compelling reading, now would it?<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: justify;\">The remainder of the story deals with the cat-and-mouse act between the duo: Lincoln expertly identifying all the loose ends to investigate, Reich having already figured out a way to tie them up without implicating himself.\u00a0The novel is very much the definition of a page-turner: Barely a page goes by without some new event rocking the case, or if the world isn&#8217;t busy being shattered the characters are delivering engrossing, clever dialogue to each other.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: justify;\">Speaking of clever\u00a0dialogue, <em>The Demolished Man<\/em> has an interesting mechanic when it deals with interactions between psychics: Psychics do not necessarily have to speak in sequence, nor linearly. Of course, why would they limit themselves like that? In the novel, they transmit <em>images<\/em> to\u00a0each other at lightning fast speeds. The novel occasionally offers a glimpse into how this might look, providing diagrams\u00a0of words laid out in odd formations, requiring the reader to spend some time decoding what is being communicated. This paints a picture of just how brilliant the espers are.\u00a0The author doesn&#8217;t overdo this: There&#8217;s only a handful of cases where espers communicate in a less traditional way, and Bester\u00a0will usually write out the dialogue in the more standard A speaks, B speaks form. This is welcome, because the readers aren&#8217;t espers. Probably.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: justify;\">I have only a few complaints: First, the twists are obvious. Maybe they&#8217;re only obvious because we&#8217;ve had so many similar twists in the years since this novel came out, but the book does rely off of the reader not paying too much attention. There&#8217;s one particularly nasty offender early on, which you can catch even before a tenth of the way through the book, before it&#8217;s revealed properly at the one-quarter mark, and then again near the d\u00e9nouement if you still haven&#8217;t worked it out.\u00a0This would be fine, if it wasn&#8217;t such a central insight into why the plot is happening! That said, guessing or not guessing the twist won&#8217;t take away enjoyment from the book. So don&#8217;t worry if you think you know where things are going, there&#8217;s plenty more to keep you entertained along the way.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: justify;\">Secondly, the ending feels rushed. There&#8217;s a huge plot device that is introduced by Lincoln out of nowhere, and it seems like it only exists in order to wrap up the story. It&#8217;s a fun plot device, don&#8217;t get me wrong. It&#8217;s just so deus ex machina, I wonder if the novel could have benefit from an extra chapter or two, or a Chekov&#8217;s Gun earlier on.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: justify;\">Finally, the resolution for Lincoln is also pretty weird. It&#8217;s not something I&#8217;ll discuss in detail, but I&#8217;m not sure if you were meant to take away a different idea about Lincoln given his last actions in the book. The emotions he ends up expressing are not what I would associate with someone we&#8217;re meant to consider a hero. Maybe the intention was to show just how<em>\u00a0<\/em>progressive they are in the future.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: justify;\">In conclusion, the story is solid, the characters have rich personalities, the writing is a pleasure to read. There&#8217;s some exciting ideas, some flawed executions, and overall a good book. I&#8217;m amazed it was written in 1951!\u00a0I&#8217;d recommend it easily to any fans of the science fiction genre. Even the less sci-fi minded fans of traditional crime fiction could find enjoyment in <em>The Demolished Man<\/em>.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: justify;\">&#8211; Matthew<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>The Demolished Man\u00a0(Alfred Bester, 1951)\u00a0is a science-fiction inverted detective story, equal parts Ocean&#8217;s Eleven and Death Note. The novel tells the story of business monolith Ben Reich&#8217;s mission to murder rival conglomerate owner Craye D&#8217;Courtney in a world where psychics (or espers, &#8216;extra-sensory perception&#8217;-ers) form a significant proportion\u00a0of the population and a pre-meditated murder hasn&#8217;t <a class=\"read-more\" href=\"http:\/\/maybethepoint.com\/books\/2015\/08\/10\/how-to-kill-your-rivals-and-influence-people-the-demolished-man\/\">[&hellip;]<\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":153,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[4,17,15,18],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-151","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","has-post-thumbnail","hentry","category-book-review","category-crime","category-science-fiction","category-the-demolished-man"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"http:\/\/maybethepoint.com\/books\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/151","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"http:\/\/maybethepoint.com\/books\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"http:\/\/maybethepoint.com\/books\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/maybethepoint.com\/books\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/maybethepoint.com\/books\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=151"}],"version-history":[{"count":11,"href":"http:\/\/maybethepoint.com\/books\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/151\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":394,"href":"http:\/\/maybethepoint.com\/books\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/151\/revisions\/394"}],"wp:featuredmedia":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/maybethepoint.com\/books\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media\/153"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"http:\/\/maybethepoint.com\/books\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=151"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/maybethepoint.com\/books\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=151"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/maybethepoint.com\/books\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=151"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}